Sunday, February 2, 2020

Estephanie's "Ozymandias" Prewriting




5 comments:

  1. I noticed something similar about the alliteration- there are other alliterated pairs, but S is a constant throughout the poem, highlighted in the final line. I thought that perhaps it was meant to help set the desert scene

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  2. I wonder if the poem is supposed to feel like a "visage" of the author. Considering it means a "face," the author could be purposefully hiding his own face by having the traveller speak for him.

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  3. Talking about Visage, and going a little bit off of what Arial said - I really like the idea of "face", but instead of the author covering his own face, I think it's Ozymandias who is hiding. I love that "visage" is paired with "shattered", almost as if it is the shattered facade of Ozymandias, who was considered this fantastic king, but is now fallen.

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  4. "Visage" meaning appearance takes on a strong meaning to me in this poem. Perhaps the word choice is meant to play up Shelley's purpose in writing the sonnet about Ozymandias-- to make a play at hubris. Using the word visage denotes that perhaps Shelley is showing that pride boils down to nothing more than appearance.

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  5. Alliteration was also something that stood out a lot to me. However, I couldn't really think of why it could be significant. I wonder if it was just something Shelley did to make the poem sound good, or if we could analyze it a little bit more. I doubt it was unintentional, but that's also an option.

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